the "thought"ful mating!
It elopes with another
to give birth to yet another;
and so i'm raising countless-
every instant, it grows boundless!
I give in to the pleasure of thinkin,
but it's so quick i'm left half-way through;
even there i'm only thinkin,
about how fast it grew,and zap-jus flew!
Selfish is exactly what it is,
coz it links with another and drags me there;
and the choice of connection is totally its,
meaning-i'll end up i don't know where!
It always sheets my mind.
I don't know how they mate!
But when they do,all im left with,
is a 'clan' of thoughts!My fate!
Does 'it' dictate my evolution?
or do i rule its linking quest?
Oh!but it won't get no emancipation,
for then i'll live an eternal rest!
It flies,it hides,it builds and unfolds;
never once does it stop to breath...
It wanders, it shows,it teaches it holds-
My life.Dont ever stop to breathe!
to give birth to yet another;
and so i'm raising countless-
every instant, it grows boundless!
I give in to the pleasure of thinkin,
but it's so quick i'm left half-way through;
even there i'm only thinkin,
about how fast it grew,and zap-jus flew!
Selfish is exactly what it is,
coz it links with another and drags me there;
and the choice of connection is totally its,
meaning-i'll end up i don't know where!
It always sheets my mind.
I don't know how they mate!
But when they do,all im left with,
is a 'clan' of thoughts!My fate!
Does 'it' dictate my evolution?
or do i rule its linking quest?
Oh!but it won't get no emancipation,
for then i'll live an eternal rest!
It flies,it hides,it builds and unfolds;
never once does it stop to breath...
It wanders, it shows,it teaches it holds-
My life.Dont ever stop to breathe!
6 Comments:
keep thinking and think a lot more!
Th'ought'ful indeed..but given the way u write..u ought to think..and write..and u asked life not to stop breathing..well take this!
Flowers of fragrance bloom all along ur journey of life..
and even after it, for they adorn u as wreathe!
Life afterall is just a journey,
of a tender fragrance called Breath!
whoaaa!!!hav mercy!!that is jus too much thought!!
well...the line goes..."it wanders,it shows,it teaches,it holds my life.
dont ever stop to breath"...as in thoughts hold my life.its the "thought" that is being asked not to stop breathing...anyway,,,awesome lines...r they ur "thoughts"??
Divyajee!!! what does the question," r they ur "thoughts"?? " mean!!! i dont see an emoticon here for crying..the question compells me to do so.
and haan!i could see that IT was thought.but when my eyes fell on last line....i was reminded of life-breath! but divya! i like this thought behind the thought! i mean, the thought which wrote this poetry!! i like that! Perhaps Life, as such , is just a thought, in the mind of the unknown. whoa! thats more philo..let me cut it here.
life is just a thought...anyone game to beat that???n sorry about the question....it made too much sense to come out of a 'gemini'...kiddin!!!!
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