My Plea to “The Oblivious”…
Stringed with a knot in my throat,
And with a bed of tears mute,
You sneak into my clustered mind,
With a luminous aura that makes me blind.
Caught am I in your dealings so,
I just can’t seem to go with the flow.
As the clouds of your thoughts bloom
I’m roped to you, and it makes me fume.
It’s the crossing time I await;
For I can offer no better bait,
But for the discomfiting love I’d rain,
In capricious joys and in comforting pains.
I wish you could stoop down to me,
To take a dekko and for yourself see,
That I could perhaps live up to you;
(En plus) a flower’s ‘complete’ with a tiny drop of dew!
And with a bed of tears mute,
You sneak into my clustered mind,
With a luminous aura that makes me blind.
Caught am I in your dealings so,
I just can’t seem to go with the flow.
As the clouds of your thoughts bloom
I’m roped to you, and it makes me fume.
It’s the crossing time I await;
For I can offer no better bait,
But for the discomfiting love I’d rain,
In capricious joys and in comforting pains.
I wish you could stoop down to me,
To take a dekko and for yourself see,
That I could perhaps live up to you;
(En plus) a flower’s ‘complete’ with a tiny drop of dew!
5 Comments:
You are worth much more than a little stooping down to da..
the last line is great..
sigh!who understand will always do da!and the rest live in "oblivion!"...thats wat made me make this "plea"...n thats why "stoop down" was used!
if i say good...my comments would sound cliche`..but still.. i must say..i am unable to catch up with ur frequency (of of posting blogs..)..
sorry..a correction..i am unable to catch up with ur frequency of posting Good Blogs..
thanx aakarsh...i guess i can NEVER attain the quality in your posts..i guess as kedar put it"rarity (further)increases the worth"...I am still not able to get over your "bliss'ed" post!lovely job!
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