His world...his deeds...his weeds...
He who comprehends not
what his neighbour speaks;
what world will he conquer,
but for the world of solitude!
He who cares not a wee,
for what his co-breathers seek,
what issues will he solve,
or initiate a world idyllic!
He who gathers not the tongue
of honesty, but prefers facts farce,
what truth will he announce
to the world that thinks his way!
He who quits the flower
that had but one a thorn,
what bunch will he make-when
thorns are all he's left with!
He who lives in a world-his own
can better no other world,before
rooting the weeds that in his world have grown.
weeds unwanted. or weeds he had sown!
what his neighbour speaks;
what world will he conquer,
but for the world of solitude!
He who cares not a wee,
for what his co-breathers seek,
what issues will he solve,
or initiate a world idyllic!
He who gathers not the tongue
of honesty, but prefers facts farce,
what truth will he announce
to the world that thinks his way!
He who quits the flower
that had but one a thorn,
what bunch will he make-when
thorns are all he's left with!
He who lives in a world-his own
can better no other world,before
rooting the weeds that in his world have grown.
weeds unwanted. or weeds he had sown!
10 Comments:
god,I love the last line!'weeds he'd sown! indeed! bravo,Mlle.
"He who comprehends not
what his neighbour speaks;
what world will he conquer,
but for the world of solitude!"
sometimes solitude may be all that you have because the truth which didnt masquerade under a pretentious falsehood is only heard by (un)surprisingly few people.
divya! awesome! i liked each and every line..where from do u get these ideas? let me know..i would like to visit that place...even if its ur brain..
irony indeed...most of my products of frustration sell well!!i guess thats one good thing about makin me frustrated!i wish i could claim to hav a brain aakarsh..but i still am lookin 4 mine...
aakarsh!
The poem is supposed to be about me. I am proud of it (well.. most of it!), however, I am dissappointed that there are 7 "he"s and 4 "his" in there without a capital "H".
gross insult!
Kedar.
endless assumptions...endless possibiities...endless perceptions!
a small correction kedar...
there are 6 "he's" and six "his's" in the correction part that u r talkin abt...(if they need to be corrected!)
this "culpamania" is contagious... dont you think?
u bet!wats life if not for culpating others for faults pf your own...if u know wat i mean!
This was on Aug 30, 2005.
Today is Aug 31, 2009.
4 years. Long way. :)
Take time, sometimes, to open all your previous posts. Read them. They reveal amazing facets of your personality.
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