Tuesday, October 11, 2005

The same old story...

What makes you unlike,
the thorn i had bred?
What keeps you away,
from the hell i had embraced?
What dreams do you sell,
that i have not yet suffered?
What pains do you shower,
that has never breezed my way?
What tears do you promise,
that i have not yet worn?
The same old hopes,
and endless wishes.
The same old dreams,
and seeming chances.
The same old tricks,
and poisoned joys...
The same old story
of an eternal wait...

7 Comments:

Blogger Aakarsh said...

I bow before Thee...

12:28 PM, October 12, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I am repeating myself..nice poem da.

What dreams do you sell,that I have not yet suffered?

wasn't this line a little different?

12:29 PM, October 12, 2005  
Blogger divya said...

wow!quelle memoire ma cherie!!je t'ai dit non...que je l'ai ecrit sans penser du blog...c'est la vrai version mlle!
je sais pas pour qoui, mais j'ai fait qq corrections juste avant de l'envoyer a toi...mais apres, j'ai decide de retenir la vrai version...et c'est ca!!

5:25 PM, October 12, 2005  
Blogger Gandaragolaka said...

younsters of this generation seem smarter... whatever you say, I seem to notice that "been there, done that" feeling.

where is that sweet adorable innocence?

wonder where we are heading to...

9:36 AM, October 13, 2005  
Blogger divya said...

i swear i have pangs of guilt for having let go of that dear old buddy...had to stake that to 'live strong'(hehe!)...
by the way...i don't think i should try my hand at speaking somebody else's mind,coz it doesnt seem too laudable.

10:15 AM, October 13, 2005  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

do not give easily what destiny wants... redeem all that you can... squeeze it until there is no more...

9:25 PM, October 13, 2005  
Blogger divya said...

whoa!melancholy??ahem...lets tone down a little on that...its jus disappointment.nothing else...

4:07 PM, October 16, 2005  

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